My family
I’m the younger son of three siblings. My older sister is a girl called Sara and Brian is in the middle. He is one year younger than Sara and two years older than me. My parents have a shop in the center of Barcelona. They sell stuff for the kitchen like cups, plates, cutlery, pans, pots… It’s a hard job because they work a lot of hours. Sometimes, when I leave the school, I go to the shop which is near our home. It’s a way to spend more time with my parents. I feel that they are proud of me. While I’m staying in the shop, they are saying to the customers all the time, that I’m a big help.
In my family we usually have meals together. It’s the time that we can talk about what it had happened during the day. It’s fun and my parents don’t let us to turn on the TV. When we finish the meal my siblings and I always clear the table. In fact, it’s the unique task that we have to do. But I suspect that we will have to do more housework soon.
By the way, my name is Lucas!
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My family
I’m the younger son youngest (son) of three siblings. My (older) sister is a girl called Sara and (my brother) Brian is in the middle. (o.. My sister Sara is the oldest and (my brother) Brian is in the middle.) He is one year younger than Sara and two years older than me. My parents have a shop in the center of Barcelona. They sell stuff for the kitchen like cups, plates, cutlery, pans, pots… It’s a hard job because they work a lot of hours. Sometimes, when I leave the school, I go to the shop which is near our home. It’s a (good) way to spend more time with my parents. I feel that they are proud of me. While I’m staying in the shop, they are always saying to (the) customers all the time, that I’m a big help.In my family we usually have meals together. It’s the time that we can (o.. It's a good chance to..) talk about what it had happened during the day. It’s fun and (o.. but) my parents don’t let us to turn on the TV. When we finish the meal, my siblings and I always clear the table. In fact, it’s the unique only task that we have to do. But I suspect that we will have to do more housework soon.
By the way, my name is Lucas!
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My family
I’m the youngest son of three siblings. My older sister is a girl called Sara and Brian is in the middle. He is one year younger than Sara and two years older than me. My parents have a shop in the center of Barcelona. They sell stuff* items for the kitchen like cups, plates, cutlery, pans, pots… It’s a hard job because they work a lot of hours. Sometimes, when I leave the school, I go to the shop which is near our home. It’s a way to spend more time with my parents. I feel that they are proud of me. While I’m staying in the shop, they are saying to always telling the customers all the time, that I’m a big help.In my family we usually have meals together. It’s the time that we can talk about what it has happened during the day. It’s fun and my parents don’t let us to turn on the TV. When we finish the meal my siblings and I always clear the table. In fact, it’s the unique only task (better: chore) that we have to do. But I suspect that we will have to do more housework soon.
By the way, my name is Lucas!
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* 'stuff' is a slang word for 'things', it shouldn't be used in writing.
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