My Childhood

My childhood was a time of happiness.  I was living in my grandmother's family and was freedom without no parental discipline of my parent. I didn't like studying.  At that time,Those days I often went fishing with my friends. I like playing billiards, ridding a bicycle and going to swimming in a pool. I was so naive that I dont be worried did not have to worry about anything.  My grandmother like loves me very much.  She often gave me money so that I can buy whatever I wanted to get. Sometimes I also fought with my classmates.  But I was usual Usually I was the winner.  I have a cousin.  We studied at in the same school.  So we like the blood brothers. My favorite pastime is have having a picnic. We took delicious nice food to the field by on our bikes.  We breathed the fresh clean air and sit above sat on the grass and saw looked at the sky.  The sky It was so blue without a piece of no clouds.  Now I miss my childhood. I want to be back return to my childhood days again.  In my dreams, I always soar above the sky and see look down on my childhood days.

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My Childhood

My childhood was happiness【用happy就好了，这样也可以明白就是了】.I was living in grandmather's family and was freedom【free】 without discipline of my parent.I didn't like studying .At that time,I often went fishing with my friends.I like playing billiards,ridding【riding】 a bicycle and going to swimming in a pool.I was so naive that I dont be worried【加一个about介词】 anything.My grandmother like【时态 ！】 me very much.She often gave me money.I can buy what I want to get.Sometimes I also fought with my classmates.But I was usual winner【单复数】.I have a cousin.We studied at the same school.So we like the blood brother.My favorite is have【having】 a picnic.We took nice food to field by bike .We breathed the fresh clean air and sit【时态】 above the grass and saw the sky.The sky was so blue without【改成with no piece of好些，或者，干脆完全重整】 a piece of cloud.Now I miss my childhood.I want to be back to my childhood again.In my dreams,I always soar above the sky and see my childhood 【如有错误，还请其他朋友多多指教，拜谢^^】

My Childhood

My childhood was filled with happiness. I was living with my grandmother's family. It was freedom without the discipline of my parents. I didn't like studying. During that time, I often went fishing with my friends. I like playing pool, ridding my bike and going swimming. I was so naive that I didn't worry about anything. My grandmother liked me very much. She often gave me money. I can buy whatever i would like to get. Sometimes I also fought with my classmates, but usually I was the winner. I have a cousin who I studied together with at the same school. So we are like the blood brothers. My favorite thing to do is to have a picnic. We would bring food and ride our bikes to a nice field. We breathed fresh clean air, sat on the grass and saw the sky. The sky was very blue without a single cloud. Now I miss my childhood. I want to revisit my childhood. In my dreams, I always soar above the sky and see my visions of my childhood.