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attempt of article The quality of a friendship. Frienship is one of important things in a life of a human being, after Love and Family. Have a good friend is a fortune and this trait is as rare as sincere a friend could be. Just imagine to have someone that you could call when you need help and he is available to listen you also if you don’t meet him/her for some time: this is a good friendship. I think that a real friend might be reliable and honest: these are the main features he/she could have. I’m absolutely terrified at the idea to meet persons that are insensitive, unreliable and dishonest. A good company have to be sympathetic, patient, polite and cheerful. As regard these qualities I could tell about my best friend Julie: she is very kind and so sensitive. She is always generous and never impatient. The best thing about her is that she is so imaginative and sympathetic. The only thing I dislike about her is that she is a bit lazy. But this is a lack of her character that one might pass over. To conclude, in my opinion, a best friend never turn away if you will need of him/her and he/she appreciate if you will phone him/her just to know how he/she is although he/she is halfway around the world.

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The quality of a friendship.

Friendship is one of the most important things in a human being's life of a human being, after love and family. Havinge a good friend is a fortune, and this trait is as rare as sincere a friend could be.
Just imagine what it would be like to have someone that you could call when you need help and to have someone who he is available to listen to you even also if you don’t meet with them him/her for some time: this is a good friendship.
I think that a real friend must might be reliable and honest: these are the main features he/she could have. (This is just a little repetitive.) I’m absolutely terrified at the idea of to meeting people persons that are insensitive, unreliable and dishonest. A good person company has have to be sympathetic, patient, polite and cheerful. In As regard to these qualities, I could tell about my best friend Julie;: she is very kind and so sensitive. She is always generous and never impatient. The best thing about her is that she is so imaginative and sympathetic. The only thing I dislike about her is that she is a bit lazy. But this is a lack of her character flaw that one might look pass over.
To conclude, in my opinion, a best friend must never turn away if you will need of them. him/her and They should he/she appreciate if you will phone them him/her just to know how they he/she are doing, is  even if although they he/she are is halfway around the world.
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Hi Jessica,

"The" attempt of "an" article (you always add "an" before words that start with A, E, I, O, U)

The quality of a friendship.

Frienship Friendship is one of "the" important things in a "the" life of a human being, after Love and Family. Have "Having" a good friend is a fortune and this trait is as rare as "a" sincere a friend could be.
Just imagine to have "having" someone that you could call when you need help and he is available to listen "to" you also if you don’t meet him/her for some time: this is a good friendship.
I think that a real friend might be reliable and honest: these are the main features he/she could have. I’m absolutely terrified at the idea to meet persons "people" that are insensitive, unreliable and dishonest. A good company have "has" to be sympathetic, patient, polite and cheerful. As regard "With regards to" these qualities I could tell about my best friend Julie: she is very kind and so sensitive. She is always generous and never impatient. The best thing about her is that she is so imaginative and sympathetic. The only thing I dislike about her is that she is a bit lazy. But this is a lack of her character that one might pass over.
To conclude, in my opinion, a best friend never turn "turns" away if you will need of him/her and he/she appreciate "appreciates" if you will "would" phone him/her just to know how he/she is although he/she is halfway around the world.

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