Something About Plane Flying1.

I had to go China for reason because of my visa. then I took plane for my twice time I had to fly twice. I took my first pane with was nervous for my first time but some was expected. Every All kinds of people from many countries came here aboard on this flight from one country to another country, Maybe Some of them having a were traveling for business or on vacation.or having a work,and so on.  I saw The airport that was so wide and big spacious.  The plane in bule the blue sky looked so tiny than they were on the ground.  not biger than they were in the land. How wonderful It were invented it is that airplanes were invented.  I was arranged to seat in the aiels where seated in the aisle and therefore I couldn't see the view outside. However everbody had has their own smalll TV some films on it. and you can also swich it on, oof the TV just turned tune on in the music and choose the any channel of your choice.  what you liked.  It was so much fun when the plane took off for my first time.  funny for my first time took plane.There were also provided some Food and drinks were provided by the air hostess.and I saw the hostes who I only watched in the TV were all They were kind and brought us a pleasant their service was good just like what I had watched on TV.

1.  Your are describing your flying experience, not about the aeroplane itself.

See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm for you punctuation errors.