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10000BC
Just before Recently, i had watched a good movie named called (it is better to say "the movie called ...") 10000 BC. It talks tells (talk means to be in conversation with someone, tell is to tell a story, fairy tale) us a fairy tale that long long ago ,there is was (if you tell a story in the past then everything should be in the past) a little village. But they only depend depended on hunting to support the whole entire is better here village. but someday a little girl was found and bring brought an information that a big disaster would be coming (passive) but someone will save all of the people and the girl would become his that person's wife and no one could would be hungry. what a pity, i con't can't discribe describe the film in english entire entirely....
Well this wasn't bad, you should keep practicing.
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