My failure
Yesterday my daughters tooth fell out. At night tooth fairy gave to my daughter a gift. Today Sofia tell me:"Mom! Does adults deceive sometimes?" I ask her:"Why do you ask?" Sofia tell me:"Because fairys gift smell like you!"
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My Failure
Yesterday, my daughter’s tooth fell out. That night, the tooth fairy gave a gift to my daughter. Today, she asked me, “Mom! Do adults deceive other people sometimes?" I asked her, “Why do you ask me that?" My daughter, Sofia, then told me, “Because the fairy’s gift smells like you!”
Hi. Good job! A funny story! Thanks for sharing! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that this helps you. J.
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Very cute story. Thank you for sharing. :-)
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