Each student is unique
Each student is unique and has a different way of learning; as skills, abilities and motivations are also different, it is vital to focus not only on the training needs, but also on all those characteristics of the personality and their own psycho-evolutionary development, identify what they learn and how they do it, making an optimized use of materials and teaching resources according to each profile.
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Each student is unique
Each student(1) is unique and has a different way of learning; as skills, abilities and motivations are also different, it is vital to focus not only on the student's training (better: educational) needs, but also on all those characteristics of the his personality and their his own psycho-evolutionary development, identify what and how they(1) learn and how they(1) do it, making an optimizing(2) the use of materials and teaching resources according to each profile.(3)====
(1) The sentence begins with a singular subject (each student is...) but then switches to a plural predicate (they learn...).
(2) Everywhere except the US, the UK English spelling is 'optimise/optimising'.
(3) In English, this is considered a run-on sentence. Syntactically and linguistically, Spanish can handle very long sentences with many clauses because (among other things) the relationship between subject, verb, and object is a lot more obvious than in English. Since you've obviously mastered advanced English grammar and syntax, I'd recommend trying to break up long sentences like this into two or three shorter ones. Other than that, your writing is at least university level.
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Each student is unique
Each student is unique and has a different way of learning; as skills, abilities and motivations are also different. It is vital to focus not only on the training needs of each individual , but also on all those characteristics of their personality and their own psycho-evolutionary development, identify what they learn and how they learn do it,. Once evaluated, make an optimized use of materials and teaching resources according to each profile.What you wrote is fine..this is a little different. I have noted that Spanish writes use longer sentences than Americans.
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Gracias, Viviana.
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I find it excellent.Good work!
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Muchas gracias por la ayuda en la correción y por vuestro tiempo. Saludos.
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