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My way to work takes 45 minutes. Fifteen of them i go on foot. It's a pleasant walk. Half of it i go along sunny side of street where grow nice bushes, that bloom in spring and coloured with berries in autumn. There are a lot of funny birds usually. The other half of the way goes near the school and kindergarden. I like to look at the kids: how they hurry to classes, play football and catch-up, dig in the sandbox. They cheer me up. Last part of the way I go by bus and read books - about three in a year, if they are not too thick :)
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Please correct the text :)
My commute takes 45 minutes, 15 of which are on foot. It's a pleasant walk. Half is on the sunny side of the street, where plants bloom in the spring and have berries in the fall. Usually, there are a lot of interesting birds. The other half goes near the school and kindergarten. I like to watch the kids hurry to class, play football and catch-up, and dig in the sandbox. They cheer me up. The last part is by bus. I read books on the way - about three in a year, if they are not too thick :)========
* commute = [way to work]
* the word bushes is less common, maybe plants is ok?
* not sure funny is used for birds, maybe interesting is ok?
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