Hot spring in the springtime
Hot spring is always good, much more so in a open air.
Moreover, with a view of the sea.
Hot water with herb and apple satisfied me.
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A hot spring in the springtime
A hot spring is always good, much more so in the a open air Moreover, with a view of the sea too.Hot water with herbs and apple satisfied me.
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Hot spring in the springtime
*1 Hot spring is always good, much more so in a open air. *2Moreover, with a view of the sea.*3
Hot water with herb(s) and apple*4 satisfied me.
*1 'is' is singular, so; "a hot spring is"
*2 "戸外なら"
"much more so IF it is open-air"
alternatively;
"even more so if it is open-air"
*3 Two options;
1. "Moreover, it had a view of the sea"
2. "...open air, AND moreover with a view of the sea"
A sentence needs a topic (it/the hot spring) and a verb (is/had). Add the topic+verb into 1, or merge it like with 2
*4 "an apple" or "apples"
難しいね。分かりました？
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