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BAD DAY When am listening to an old but classic song which named Rhythm of The Rain, I feel more sad. It's such a depressing day. In the early morning, I spilled a glass of milk which I was about to drink, and stained my favorite skirt. When I planned to bring my skirt to do laundry, unfortunately, I fell on the stairs and embraced with the tough ground. Some girls passed me but no one reached out to me, in addition, they giggled towards me. They laughed so loudly that I could even hear their laughter even if they were away.

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BAD DAY

When I am listening to an old but classic song which named Rhythm of The Rain, I feel get more and more sad.
It's such a depressing day. In the early morning, I spilled a glass of milk which I was about to drink and stained my favorite skirt. When I planned to bring my skirt to do the laundry, unfortunately, I fell on the stairs and embraced with hit the tough ground. Some girls passed me, but no one reached out to helped me out. In fact (Instead) addition, they giggled towards at me. They laughed so loudly that I could even still hear their laughs even if when they were had walked far away.

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