Self Introduction E2
After I found there was no good return on investment for a gift shop, I started to purchase some Australian products for my Chinese customers. Such as vitamins, milk powder, alpaca quilt etc. The profit is more than I expected. I did this small business for around 6months, then I registered an international trade company. It is called "Rena Australia", the name is not cool, right ?LoI That's the last four letters of my English name.
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Self Introduction E2
After I found there is small profit from a gift shop, I started to puchase some Australian products for my Chinese customers such as vitamins, milk powder, alpaca quilt etc. This profit was more than I expected. I did this small business for about 6 months, then I registered an international trading company. It is called "Rena Australia", the name is not cool, right ?LoI That's my English name's last four letters.
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very well written and cool name!
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Self Introduction E2
After I found there is was no good return of/on investment for a gift shop, I started to purchase some Australian products to for my Chinese customers, products such as vitamins, milk powder, alpaca quilts etc. (Not absolutely necessary to reiterate "products" here, but it sounds better. Also, just "Such as..." alone, is not a complete sentence subject-verb-object, etc., so I joined it with the earlier sentence. It might be better somehow as two sentences though. Also "return on investment" is a phrase and since you use it with "no good" before, you must be using this phrase.) The profit is was more than my I expected. (The profit from this exceeded my expectations.) I did this small business for around 6 months, then I registered one an international trade company. It called it Rena Australia; the name is not cool, right? (Possibly the name of the company should be in quotes here, I'm not sure.) LoI That's the last four letters of my English name last four letters.To be continued.
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