My trip to USA - Part two
Please, correct my mistakes, once more!
Dear friends,
I want ride for the Disney Parks with my oldest daughter Bia.
She always to have a dream to know it.
We will go in 2018 july. We would like to know the bests attractions for the Park.
Somebody, Can help us?
Thanks a lot!
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Please, correct my mistakes once more!
Dear friends, I want to go on the rides at the Disney Parks with my oldest daughter Bia. She has always dreamed of going there. We will go in July 2018. We would like to know the bests attractions for the Park. Can somebody help us? Thanks a lot!
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My trip to USA - Part two
Please, correct my mistakes, once more!Dear friends,
I want a suggestion for rides ride for the Disney Parks with my oldest daughter Bia. (I added 'suggestion' here because 'I want a ride' could be interpreted as asking for transportation to the Disney Parks. Instead, this is a request for suggestions on what to ride, yes?)
She always to have a dream to know it She has always dreamed of going. (Present perfect implies duration. Using 'know' could work, but English would use a different verb, such as 'going', 'seeing', 'experiencing' to indicate familiarity or experience in this context.)
We will go in 2018 july of 2018. We would like to know the bests best attractions for of (OR: in) the Park.
Somebody, Can help us? Can somebody help us? (Setting 'somebody' apart with a comma leaves the rest of the sentence without a subject, and sentences without some subject, even a pronoun like 'it', is very strange in English.)
Thanks a lot!
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