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The best way to improve health to do regular exercise, Do agree? ? Health never fail becomes a hot topic has been debatable in a public. Everybody wants to be a healty one and do everything to keep their health by doing regular exercise, some people think that it can improve their health. However, in my opinion i disagree that the best way to improve health is to do regular exercise, because controlling diet have the big rule in improving the health To begin with, some research found that controlling diet have 90% effect the health, which exercise just have 10% effect on health. Moreover, many people do not like exercise and prefer to monitore their food for keeping their health, this is due to exercise needs a few time to do it. whereas, controlling food can be done everytime and do not takes the time to do it. In brief, many people want to gain the good health with a practicel job

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The best way to improve health to do regular exercise, Do you agree?

Health never fails to become a hot topic to be debated in a public. Everybody wants to be a healthy one and do everything to keep their health by performing regular exercise.  Some people think that it can improve their health; however, in my opinion, I disagree that the best way to improve health is to do regular exercise because I believe that controlling diet has the largest role in improving the health.

To begin with, some research has found that controlling diet has a 90% effect on one's health.  Exercise has just have 10% effect on health. Moreover, many people do not like to exercise and prefer to monitor their food in order to maintain good health.  This is due to the fact that exercise needs a few time to complete, whereas, controlling food can be done at all times and do not takes less time to do. In brief, many people want to gain the good health with a practicel job.  This last part in yellow doesn't relate to what you have been saying.

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