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Hi James!
I'm writing you for say you that the party of yesterday was amazing! Thank you for the invitation. I enjoyed so much.
I have two invitations for the match of today on Central Park. Do you want to came with me ?
Kisses!
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Hi James!I'm writing you for say you that the party of yesterday was amazing! Thank you for the invitation. I enjoyed so much.
I have two invitations for the match of today on Central Park. Do you want to came with me ?
Kisses!
This is a good attempt, the meaning is clear. However, it would be better with these changes:
Hi James!
I'm writing to you for to say you that yesterday's the party of yesterday was amazing! Thank you for the invitation. I enjoyed it so much.
I have two invitations for the match of today on at Central Park. Do you want to came come with me ?
Let me know,
Kisses! Bye,
Cristina
xx
In English we don't sign off from our letters with kisses - we can put xx at the end, which means kisses.
Hope this helps,
Annie
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Hi James!I'm writing to you for tell [or you can say: "to let you know that] you that the party of yesterday was amazing! Thank you for the invitation. I enjoyed it so much.
I have two invitations for the match of today on Central Park. Do you want to came with me ?
Kisses!
Good job Cristina! :)
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Hi James!I'm writing you for say you that the party of Yesterday's party was amazing! Thank you for the invitation. I had a great time I enjoyed so much.
I have two tickets invitations for today's match? the match of today on at Central Park. Do you want to come with me?
Kisses
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