My name is Mohamed. I have recently received a bachelor's degree in Commerce from X University. In my last year of college I pursued an accounting specialization in accounting sciencd. While I did love accounting science, I always knew that I would need to do something practical, so right out of college I got a job doing "X". I managed to gain a lot of experience there and learn more about my chosen field. That's where I really developed my teamwork skills and learned more about practical accounting in the labor market. I think that my skills in combination with my experience make me a great candidate for a position on your team. I hope that I will be able to demonstrate that for you today. does this sound natural?

Wow, great job! Sounds very natural. I tweaked a few sentences to make them flow a bit better and sound more advanced but over all great job! ممتاز!