First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, lady's and gentle man ladies and gentlemen1, I am new here! I am learning English in GUANGZHOU Guangzhou, China now. I find my English are is so bad, both in grammar and oralspeaking. I want to improve myself and make foreigner English speaking friends from other countries. I like watch movies and do love to exercise .Thanks!

1.  This phrase is very formal.  So in this setting, it may sound strange.  I suggest you use, "everyone" instead.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, ladies and gentlemen, I am new here! I am learning English in GUANGZHOU now. I find my English are is so bad, both in grammar and oral.I want to improve myself and make foreigner friends.I like to watch movie and do exercise.Thanks!