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My son has exam of English, Can you help me with his oral presentation? Part (I) Part (I) Today I'll tell you about a sport called Crossfit. which I love and I practice most of the days of the week. Crossfit is a discipline that seeks to find the perfection of the human body, both of women and men, that is, work balance, resistance, strength, power, flexibility, coordination and other physical qualities. Crossfit is based on three types of training. (for the person who is correctiing: I’m not sure about words like burpees or other technical matters, you can leave in blank if it is not clear for you) The first is called “gymnastics”, (which include pull ups, push ups, butterflies, muscle ups, ring dips The secons is called “weightlifting”, which includes high weight lifting, for example exercises such as lsnatch, power clean, clean and jerk, or a hang squad clean. And the thirdk is called “resistance”, that includes races, jumping on a rope, or doing burpees. Trainings are short but intensives. In one hour we need to mix the three different disciplines I told you before. We need to use 100% of our possibilities. I like practising this sport because I have fun when training as it has a wide range of exercices led by a great coach and the atmosphere we have is very friendly When I started I used to go with four friends and now two of them are out of town but at the same time I have met many new friends.

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My son has an English exam.  Can you help me with his oral presentation? 

Part (I)
Today I will tell you about a sport called  Crossfit,  which I love, and I practice most of the days of the week.

Crossfit is a discipline that seeks to find the perfect  human body, both of women female and men,male, that is a balance between resistance, strength, power, flexibility, coordination and other physical qualities.

Crossfit is based on three types of training.

(for the person who whoever is correctiing: I am not sure about words like burpees or other technical matters, you can leave it blank if it is not clear for you)

The first, is called “gymnastics”, (which includes pull ups, push ups, butterflies, muscle ups, ring dips. 

The second, is called “weightlifting”, which includes lifting heavy weights, for example, exercises such as the snatch, power and clean, clean and jerk, or a hang squat and clean.

And The third, is called “resistance”, that includes races, jumping on a rope (skipping / jumping over a rope), or doing burpees.?

Training sessions are short but intensive. In one hour we need to mix the three different disciplines as I told you before. We need to use 100% of our possibilities. abilities.

I like practising this sport because I have fun when training as it has a wide range of exercises that are led by a great coach and the atmosphere we have between us is very friendly.

When I started, I used to go with four friends and now two of them are out of town but at the same time I have met many new friends.

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My son has exam of English, Can you help me with his oral presentation? Part (I)

Part (I)

Today I'll tell you about a sport called Crossfit, which I love and I practice most of the days during the week.

Crossfit is a discipline that seeks to find the perfection of the human body, of both women and men, that is, work balance, resistance, strength, power, flexibility, coordination and other physical qualities.

Crossfit is based on three types of training.

(for the person who is correctiing: I’m not sure about words like burpees or other technical matters, you can leave in blank if it is not clear for you)

The first is called “gymnastics”, (which includes pull ups, push ups, butterflies, muscle ups, ring dips.

The second is called “weightlifting”, which includes (or: "consisting of", to avoid word repetition :) ) high weight lifting, for example exercises such as lsnatch, power clean, clean and jerk, or a hang squad clean.

And the thirdk is called “resistance”, that includes (or: whose main activities are) races, jumping on a rope, or doing burpees.

Trainings are short but intensives. In one hour we need to mix the three different disciplines I told you before. We need to use 100% of our possibilities.

I like practising this sport because I have fun when training as it has a wide range of exercises led by a great coach and the atmosphere we have is very friendly

When I started, I used to go with four friends and now two of them are out of town but at the same time I have met many new friends.

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