Today was a day...
Today was a beautiful day. In the morning I woke up with my dog running for my home, she look at me with love in her eyes and that moment I have sure that she loves me. After, I saw the news on my computer.
I like drink coffee in the morning because the smell is so good and the taste is amazing!
After, I just work on my computer. I talk with my brother and we have lunch together without my mom.
Peregrina is her name!
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Today was a day...
Today was a beautiful day. In the morning I was woken up by my dog and we went running around my home, she looked at me with love in her eyes and in that moment I know that she loves me. After our run, I read the news on my computer.I like to drink coffee in the morning because the smell is so good and the taste is amazing!
Afterwards, I just work on my computer, talk with my brother and we have lunch together without my mom.
Peregrina is her name!
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Hi, that's a lovely story and it sounds like the perfect day! I've added a small correction which I hope will help you.
Regards
Craig
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