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Find a goal and stick to it I have been always thinking about building a goal and sticking to it . It has been learning english for about 3 months,but i found that is not enough . I still have lots of free time and i just wasted it . I am plusing one more goal into my plan:make myself stronger.I have been seaching some information about it and i find it is really a tough job.Firstly i think i should make myself fatter before i am stronger.So i set a detail diet , i am determining to have 5 meals each day and 500ml milk with 2 eggs eveyday .Eating much more meat and chicken espically the cow meat ,if you want to get musclem, you need protein first.Now i have two goals to accomplish , i think my life will be full and better.I am sincerely thankful to every friend who amended my composition and give me the advices to how to sweep the bothered things off.

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Find a goal and stick to it

I have been always thinking about building aiming on a goal and then sticking to it . It has I have been learning English for about 3 months but i found that it is not long enough . I still have lots of free time and I just wasted it . I am plusing pursuing one more goal into my to add to my plans: to make myself physically stronger.  I have been seaching for some information about it accomplishing my goal and I find it is really a tough job.  Firstly I think I should make myself fatter before i am stronger bulk up myself first.  So I set a detail diet follow a rigid diet.  I am determininged to have 5 meals each day,  and 500ml of milk with and 2 eggs eveyday .Eating much more meat and chicken espically especially beef.   the cow meat ,if you want to get gain musclems, you need protein first. Now I have two goals to accomplish , I think my life will be fuller and better.  I am sincerely thankful to every friend who amended corrects my compositionsand give me the advices1 to how to sweep the bothered things off2.

1.  There is no plural for advice.

2.  I don't understand what you are trying to say.  Write in Chinese if you want it to be corrected since I can understand some Chinese.

 

You need to take care of your punctuation spacing.  One space after a comma and two spaces after a full stop.  CAPITALIZE your "i"s when referring to yourself.  Your writing will be percevied as uneducated even if it is grammatically correct.

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