never stop learning
I've been learning english for years.
But I still can't use it well.
Maybe I need more and more practice.
Sometimes I dream to study abroad.
In spite of whether it can come ture.I won't give up.
Also i like to make different friends for I can know more
about different culture.Additionly,it can be a funny experience.
I believe I can outdo myself!
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Never Stop Learning
I've been learning English for years.
But I still can't use it well.
Maybe I need more and more practice.
Sometimes I dream to of studying abroad.
In spite of Whether1 it can comes ture or not I won't give up.
Also I like to make different friends. for I can want to know more
about different cultures. Additionally, In addition, it can be a funny I am sure there will be interesting experiences.2
I believe I can outdo myself!
1. "Whether" is used for comparing two situations. Therefore you needed the "or not" part. "If" does not require two situations, one is fine. "If you do this.... then ....
2. Or you can say, "It will be an interesting experience for me."
Don't forget to capitalize your "i"s when referring to yourself.
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Hello, It's very nice to see you composition.I think what you write is very good. I hope we can make friends. I am from China, and I am learning English too. I hope we can improve and practise it together.Yeah, never give up.
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