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Little story behind green onion chicken soup Last semester, my friend got a cold, so I tried to make some dish to relief her sick. Then I found this recipe on line. The cooking video was posted by a Taiwanese chef, James Cheng. He also made this soup for his daughter when she was sick. Asian people have green onion and ginger when we feel weak, because these vegetables are rich of vitamins C and vitamins K which can support your immune system. Besides, ginger promotes sweating, working to warm the body from within. My mom cooked the similar soup for me before. In hometown, my mom took care of me by cooking good food, and now I am able to take care of my friends in a same way. Hope you like this dish~

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Little story behind green onion chicken soup

Last semester, my friend got a cold, so I tried to make a dish to relieve her sickness. Then I found this recipe on line.
The cooking video was posted by a Taiwanese chef, James Cheng. He also made this soup for his daughter when she was sick.
Asian people have green onion and ginger when we feel weak, because these vegetables are rich of vitamins C and vitamins K which can support your immune system. Besides, ginger promotes sweating, working to warm the body from within.
My mom cooked a similar soup for me before. In my hometown, my mom took care of me by cooking good food, and now I am able to take care of my friends in a same way.
Hope you like this dish~
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A Little Story Behind Green Onion Chicken Soup

Last semester, my friend caught a cold, so I tried to make a dish to relief her sickness. Then, I found this recipe on-line from a cooking video that was posted by a Taiwanese chef, James Cheng. He also made this soup for his daughter whenever she was sick.

Most Asian people have a meal or a soup with green onions or ginger when we feel weak since these vegetables are rich in vitamins C and K which help support your immune system. Furthermore, ginger promotes sweating, thus, working to warm the body from within. My mom cooked a similar soup for me before.

In my hometown, my mom took good care of me by cooking good food, and now, I am able to take care of my friends in the same way. I sincerely hope that you like this dish!

Hi Jinyu. Good job! Whatever changes that I’ve made were merely done to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. I hope that his helps you. J.

*Did I miss something? Where’s the recipe? (*-^)

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