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essay in english exam form Some people think that computers can distract children from their studying but others don't agree. let us consider what the advantages and disadvantages of computers are. As for me, I think that a computer can be very useful for school learning and different hobbies. One argument in support of my point of view is an increasing popularity of computers. One cannot deny that we live in the modern world where computers commonly used in different spheres of our life. Nowadays basic computer skills are important for everybody and children should learn to use a computer, get knowledge about different programs and their functions. Secondly, with computers children can study at home. They can communicate with teachers, find useful information for school projects and pass some tests. Finally, modern computers offer a great opportunity for hobbies and self-education. For example, children can use some programs for drawing and photo processing. One should, nevertheless, consider the problem from another angle. Some people say that modern children spend too much time playing videogames and chatting with friends. They consider that it can be harmful for children's health and psychology. That may be try, but on the other hand parents can control their children and make them spend more time on real life and sports. Moreover, sensible teenagers can control themselves and choose how much longer they use a computer for entertainment. To draw the conclusion I can say that we can't get rid of computer's influence, so we should learn to use it correctly. If we do it, computers will become really helpful for us and our children too.

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essay in English exam form

Some people think that computers can distract children from their studying but others don't agree. let us consider what the advantages and disadvantages of computers are.

As for me, I think that a computer can be very useful for school learning and different hobbies. One argument in support of my point of view is the increasing popularity of computers. One cannot deny that we live in a modern world where computers are commonly used in different spheres of our life. Nowadays, basic computer skills are important for everybody and children should learn to use a computer, acquire knowledge about different programs and their functions. Secondly, with computers children can study at home. They can communicate with their teachers, find useful information for school projects and take some tests. Finally, modern computers offer a great opportunity for hobbyists and self-education. For example, children can use some programs for drawing and photo processing.

One should, nevertheless, consider (or look at it) from another angle. Some people say that modern children spend too much time playing video games and chatting with friends. They consider that it can to be harmful to a child's health and psychology.

That may be true, but on the other hand, parents can control their children and make them spend more time on real life and sports. Moreover, sensible teenagers can control themselves and choose how much time longer they spend using a computer for entertainment.

In conclusion, I will say that we can't get rid of the computer's influence, so we should learn to use it correctly. If we do this, computers will become really helpful for us and our children too.
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Very good Elena

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