Please, correct the mistakes or make the relevant corrections in order to make my mail more formal
Dear XXXX,
Sorry for disturbing. I am in the process of seeking employment in Malta. Therefore I was invited to an interview for the" Operations officer" position in one of the international companies in Malta for the 30th of January. I would like to ask whether you could provide me with a reference letter. As you don't have enough information that you need in order to give me a reference I have attached a copy of my resume.
As it is quite difficult to be invited to the interview by the companies that help to provide a work permit for non-EU citizens I would really appreciate a positive reference from you that will increase my employability chance. I need to have my references ready to submit by January 30, 11 AM.
Sincerely,
Aygul Ibrahimova
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Please, correct the mistakes or make the relevant corrections in order to make my mail more formal
Dear XXXX,I am in the process of seeking employment in Malta. I was invited to an interview for the" Operations officer" position in one of the international companies in Malta on the 30th of January. I would like to ask whether you could provide me with a reference letter? Since you don't have enough information to give me a reference, I have attached a copy of my resume.
As it is quite difficult to be invited to the interview by the companies that help to provide work permits for non-EU citizens, I would really appreciate a positive reference from you that will increase my employability. I need to have my references ready to submit by 11AM on January 30,
Sincerely,
Aygul Ibrahimova
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Please, correct the mistakes or make the relevant corrections in order to make my mail more formal
Dear XXXX,I am sorry to disturb you. I am in the process of seeking employment in Malta. Most recently, I was invited to interview for the "Operations officer" position in one of the international companies in Malta on the 30th of January. I would like to ask whether you could provide me with a reference letter. As you don't have enough information and you would need more details of my background in order to give me a reference, I have attached a copy of my resume.
As it is quite difficult to be invited to interviews by the companies that help to provide a work permit for non-EU citizens, I would really appreciate a positive reference from you because this will increase my employment chances. I need to have my references ready to submit by January 30, 11 AM. I would truly appreciate your help.
Sincerely,
Aygul Ibrahimova
I made quite a few changes. I think it is better now. :) Good luck
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