I look at thee from afar, safe in distance.
I always will.
Not that your radiance repels me,
My heart's safety I surely fear...

I see not how I deserve your attention.

Your good qualities I love,
Your fautls I admire even more.


"I look at you" text

I look at you from this far away and safe distant.
I always will.
Not because you're radiance repels me.
I fear for my hearts safty...

I can't see how I deserve you're attention.



I love you're qualitys,
but I admire you're faults.


This was an atempt to write something poetry-likey, I don't know what genre it would be in.
Could someone please correct it?

I look at you from this far away and safe distance.
I always will.
Not because your radiance repels me.
I fear for my heart's safety...

I can't see how I deserve your attention.

I love your qualities,
but I admire your faults.

It looks fine, nothing major is wrong with it~

My advice, watch the difference between "you're" and "your", as well as "hearts" and "heart's".