Corrections · 1
Prejudice
I find a practice1. It's very hard and serious2. I'm an outgoing guy ,3 and so I like making firends friends on internet. But Seldom did do people add me as a friend. I'm confused, and I don't know why. Until Then one day, a friend of mine4 told me that beacouse because of the big population in China's large population , every chatting room, has many Chinese take a big part. and they think these Chinese think you just wanted to study English through them and they are confused about chinese intention5..
It shocks me I am shocked . Because My intention is to chat with others who I don't know and to exchange views on ours life, feelings and culture.
I hope there will be people who some guys can break this kind of are not prejudiced . I think most of people are frendly~~~~
1. Don't understand what you are trying to say. Write in Chinese so that I may able to help correct your English.
2. Because of your first sentence, I don't know how to correct this one.
3. Do not leave a space before the comma, or full stop. Leave a space after a comma and 2 spaces after the full stop.
4. This is not grammatically incorrect but is redundant. If you say "a friend" it is understood that this is your friend, "a friend of James" means this person is not your friend but a friend of James.
5. Again I don't understand what you are trying to say here.
It takes time to find real friends. I can understand your point. Sometimes I too feel that people wants to be my friend is because I have a great command of English. They are not friends but aquaintances. Of course I can't blame them, it's human nature.
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