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Comfortable Please correct my error Please Correct My Errors
I want to live in the side of along the Longdou park forever where I am around surrounded by nature; breathing the fresh clean air as I sat sit under the bough of a above bend small tree. I was listened ing to a singing bird voice. and I forgot forget everything. I felt it was myself as if I am the only one in the world. I put my leg above a tree to do exercise Wrapping my legs on a branch, I hang myself upside down to exercise and listened to this piece of music, which is called "The Sound Of Silence"
Comfortable Please correct my error
I want to live in the side of longdou park forever. I am surrounded by nature. Clean air as I sit under the bent small tree. I was listening to bird's singing. I forgot everything. I felt it was only me in the world. I put my leg above a tree to do exercise and listened to music which is "The Sound Of Silence"
Green are my suggestions, I think it would sound better....
Red are corrections.
It sounds beautiful and very relaxing what you wrote, good luck, hope you enjoy!
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