Two things I thought through ballet
I have taken ballet lessons for 11 years.When I was a baby, my mother and sister were taking it and I was seeing the lessons.So I was interested in it. I leaned a lot from it.I'll tell you about two things I thought.
First, we can improve through practicing hard.Of course, to watch performance of other dancers and listen to coaches' saying are important, too. However, these without practicing have no meaning. I also think practicing with having an aim is better. When I achieved my goal, I could try hard for the next one again.
Second, we should have some friends who are not in the same school with us.I usually talk with my classmates about TV programs we watched the day before, exams and rumors, etc.On the other hand, there are friends who can do their best for ballet in the lessons. Even if we have a difficult task and said terrible things by our teacher, we can try these together. I had a great time with them, especially going to Nagoya to partipate in a valley competition in summer was an exciting memory.
Ballet makes me strong. And now I thank my parents very much for supporting me.
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Two things I thought through ballet
I have taken ballet lessons for 11 years.When I was a baby, my mother and sister took lessons and I watched them,First, we can improve through practicing hard.Of course, to watch the performance of other dancers and listen to coaches' saying things is
Second, we should have some friends who are not in the same school with us.I usually talk with my classmates about TV programs we watched the day before, exams and rumors, etc.On the other hand, there are friends who can do their best at
Ballet makes me strong. And now I thank my parents very much for supporting me.
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Two things I thought through learned from ballet
I have taken ballet lessons for 11 (if the number is under 20, it is better form to write it: eleven) years. When I was a baby, my mother and sister were taking it and I was seeing would watch the lessons.So I was interested in it. I learned a lot from it. I'll tell you about two things I thoughthave learned.First, we can improve through practicing hard.Of course, to watch the performance of other dancers and to listen to what the coaches' are saying, are important, too. However, these without practicing have no meaning. I also think practicing with having an aim in mind is better. When I will have achieved my goal, I could will try hard for the next one againtime.
Second, we should have some friends who are not in the same school with us.I usually talk with my classmates about TV programs we watched the day before, exams and rumors, etc.On the other hand, there are friends who can do their best for ballet in the lessons (I am not sure what you mean here). Even if we have a difficult task and said have been told terrible things by our teacher, we can try these together. I had a great time with them,; especially (BETTER: in particular,) going to Nagoya to participate in a valley competition in summer was an exciting memory.
Ballet makes me strong. And now I thank my parents very much for supporting me.
This is a nice essay, and your thoughts are wise. Perhaps review verb tenses that you may not have in Japanese, especially the "present perfect". Thanks for this.
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