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An Observation I sat on a chair against a computer monitor. Before me there was only the monitor and a wall. My cat sat on another chair next to me. There was between me and it a half meter. A floor above my neighbor was walking around over me. A floor below my neighbors were yelling at each other under me. There was quite quiet inside my flat, but was some noise outside of my room. I stood up on cold floor and walked to a window. There was not anything interesting in order to see it beyond the window. There was only a man walked across street, stray dog along street slowly to butchers', and a pup who was running for his tail around.

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An Observation

I sat on a chair against facing a computer monitor. Before me there was only the monitor and a wall. My cat sat on another chair next to me. There was between me and it a half meter He/she was half a meter away. A On the floor above my neighbor was walking around over me. A On the floor below my neighbors were yelling at each other under me.
There It was quite quiet inside my flat, but there was some noise outside of my room. I stood up on the cold floor and walked to a the window. There was not anything nothing interesting in order to see it beyond the window through it. There was only a man walked walking across the street, a stray dog along in the street walking slowly to the butchers', and a pup who that was running for chasing his tail around.

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Great observations! Cool thing to write about. Some things sounded weird but I tried to correct it as much as I can. Various sentences still sound awkward but it should sound a little better now.

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