Talking about myself.

I am a student and I have a dream, which is i want to visit many beautiful places. I also want to study in a foreign country, so I must study hard and learn English every day. I just know that if my English is very poor, I will have no chance to go to an English-speaking country.
I hope I can make friends with some foreigners. I think I can improve my English if I talk with them often.
In summary, I am learning English for my future.

You need to capitalize all your "I" regardless and your proper nouns such as English.  You must leave a space after every punctuation mark except for the full stop, which requires two.  Also if you have difficulty in expressing something in English, write in Chinese so that those who can understand the language can help you express in English.  For example, what you wrote as the title means that you want people to talk about you instead of talking about yourself.

talk about me About myself

i am a student.I have a dream which is i want to be able to visit many bueautiful places. I also want to study in foreign country.  So i must study hard, learn English everyday. I just known that if my English was very is poor,i would have no My chances to of go to visiting foreign country is small.

I hope I can make some friends with foreigner foreign friends. I think I can improve my English if I often can talk more often with them.

on the whole,I need  learn English for my future