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Graduate Students Must Start Looking For Jobs << 제목에중요한단어들을(명사, 대명사, 주요동사,형용사, 그리고부사) 대문자로써야합니다.
Today our teacher told the graduate students that we should start looking for a job. Even though I'm not a graduate student, I'm still worried about it.
I'm worried because I know myself very well and I haven't done anything to prepare for my job search all year.
However I've disovered that a lot of other students have already begun preparing for this. I've learned that they've done such things as obtained teacher certification, an English #4 class certification and/or an accountant certificate, among other things.
Starting now, I really should (I really must) begin to prepare for job interviews. (my future).
우리가좋은친구가되길바래요. 여기에서제친구들과 열심히공부하고 있어요.
이건저에게아주큰도전이에요. 우리는배우기가열심해요. 둘은서로의에세이가항상수정해볼거예요. 우리가 서로의글을꾸준히수정해주면우정이계속될수있어요.
당신의영어능력을향상할수있다면, 전계속수정할거에요.하루에에세이하나씩만써주세요. 그거면충분해요. 양보다질이더중요해요. 짧은글을쓰면(쓰시다면/ 쓰려면), 드릴게요 / 고쳐드릴게요. 다른에세이를 곧쓸거에요.봐주시면감사하겠어요.
그건대문자로써야합니다.
바꿔쓸수있는표현, 또는나의추천입니다.
이건더자연스럽거나더일반적인방법의표현입니다.
오타, 또는수정이필요한부분그리고단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다. 밑줄을있을때, 맞은구두점과띄어쓰기를사용해주세요.
보라색 제코멘트입니다.
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The graduate students start looking for a job
Today our teacher said that graduate students should start looking for a job. Although I'm not yet a graduate, I am still worried about it.
Because I know myself very well. In this year, I haven't done any preparation for looking a job. But I found that so many students have realized this problem and started to build foundation. Such as gain teacher certification, English four class certificate, Accountant certificate and so on.
Now, I must make a rational plan in life.
:)
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