Trip to Germany (1) Seven years ago,my friends and I traveled to germany.Our main goal was to visit a friend that was stuying in sttugart with the eramus program and,of course, do some sightseeing.

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Trip to Germany (1) Seven years ago,my friends and I traveled to germany.Our main goal was to visit a friend that was stuying in sttugart with the eramus program and,of course, do some sightseeing. We traveled by plane from Santiago to Frankfurt,then we took a train to cologne and sightseeing the city for 2 days.Of all places that we visited, the gothic cathedral and the cologne´s love lock bridge were the ones that i liked the most. After that,we took a train again to sttugart,were our friend was living. We stayed 3 days and we did a lot of things,barbecous,sightseeing the city,and of course, we party a lot.One of the nights, we went to a festival like the octoberfest(but it was may) ,with carps,music,fair attractions and a lot of beer and "wurst". Next, we visited frankfurt again.We saw the ECB , the gardens of the center of the city, the boardwalk near the river, etc.Originally, our plan was to stay for 1 day and then travel by plain to london but a iceland´s volcano which name can´t be written "decided" to erupt and block us in frankfurt for 2 days more. Finally,we took a plain to return home. About this travel by plain(Frankfurt-Santiago) i should say that is the worst that i have ever done. The plain was constantly changing altitude giving us a terrible headache. But even with this terrible headache,the trip was a wonderfull one and i still remenber it time to time. Thanks for yours corrections!!.

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Trip to Germany (1)

Seven years ago,my friends and I traveled to Germany. Our main goal was to visit a friend that was studying in Stutgart with the Erasmus program and, of course, do some sightseeing.

We traveled by plane from Santiago to Frankfurt, then we took a train to Cologne and went sightseeing around the city for 2 days. Of all places that we visited, the Gothic cathedral and the Cologne´s lovely lock bridge were the ones that I liked the most.

After that, we took a train again to Stutgart, where our friend was living. We stayed 3 days and we did a lot of things, barbecues, sightseeing around the city, and of course, we partied a lot. One of the nights, we went to a festival like the October fest(but it was in May), with carps, music, fair attractions, a lot of beer and "wurst".

Next, we visited Frankfurt again.We saw the ECB , the gardens of in the center of the city, the boardwalk near the river, etc. Originally, our plan was to stay for 1 day and then travel by plane to London but a Iceland´s volcano with the name can´t be written I cannot write "decided" to erupt and block delayed us in Frankfurt for 2 more days more.

Finally, we took a plain to return home. About this travel The journey by plane from (Frankfurt-Santiago) I would say that is was the worst that I have ever done. The plain plane was constantly changing altitude giving us a terrible headache.

But even with this terrible headache,the trip was a wonderful one and I still remember it from time to time.

Thanks for yours corrections!!.

I is always a capital letter, never i.

Nouns e.g. Countries, cities, names, titles and events always begin with a capital letter.

Punctuation marks , ; : . ! ? require a space before the next word. One night, we went.... Not. One night,we went.

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