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Self Introduction I'm mizuki. I'm 26 years old and I married. I live with my husband and two snakes,one mouse,a pair of shrimp,two starfishes,nine green frogs. So my home likes a zoo. I work for a fermented soybeans factory. fermented soybeans is called a natto in japanese. A natto is a well-known japanese traditional food. It's not good smell and sticky food made from soy beans. Sometimes a natto is disliked by anyone,but I like it. The factory was damaged by The Earthquake of east japan. I went to my factory this morning. There are scattered splinters of glass on the floor,a hole on the wall. I can't use a water supply. So I wasn't able to wipe my desk with a wet cloth. I've been standing by waiting at home since The Earthquake happened. I've spent my time with my pets in recent months. Usually,my job is conducting a bacteriological examination. I make sure that bacteria is not exist in our products. My factory is under repair. We will resume manufactures on next month.

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Self Introduction

I'm Mizuki.
I'm 26 years old and I am married.
I live with my husband and two snakes, one mouse, a pair of shrimp, two starfishes and nine green frogs. << starfishes is correct but starfish as plural tends to sound better
So my home is likes a zoo.

I work for a fermented soybeans factory.
Fermented soybeans are called a Natto in Japanese. << Should it be spelled as Nattou?
Natto is a well-known japanese traditional food.
It does not have a good smell and it is a sticky food made from soy beans.
Sometimes a people dislike natto is disliked by anyone,but I like it.

The factory was damaged by the Earthquake of East Japan.
I went to my factory this morning.
There are scattered splinters shards of glass on the floor,a hole on the wall. << splinters is for wood
I can't use the water supply.
So I wasn't able to wipe my desk with a wet cloth.
I've been standing by, waiting at home since The Earthquake happened.
I've spent my more time with my pets in recent months.

Usually,my job is involves conducting a bacteriological examination.
I make sure that bacteria does not exist in our products.

My factory is undergoing repairs.
We will resume manufacturing on next month.

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い|Green=意見

よくできました!!無料な納豆ですよ!
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Really?! I like cats very much(*´ω`*)!! How I envy you! I can't have a cat in my apartment.
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The photo display of little mouse is so cute. I have a cat at home. White & black in colour.
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to 吴清霖 thank you! to Jennifer Oh,no.That's a shame. My snakes are gently,they doesn't bit me. I like their shapes and colors,faces. I am very interesting in them.
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You are such exotic pet lover. I really scared of snake.

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