To Emma Murphy at Holiday Store.

Response to job vacancy.

A good attempt. A little too informal in parts. Well done.

Response to vacancy job

I am applying for the available positions within the Electronic Equipment department at Holiday Store. (Write a separate letter for the music position) 

I have seen your advertising in the newspaper about vacancy jobs in several departaments. I am really keen on electronic equipment departament although the music departament suit me as well.

My current objective is to obtain employment in order to fund my current studies in (be specific about what you are studying ex: in architecture.)

I believe I would be a great fit for the  positions because of my outgoing personality, knowledge of new technologies and great communication skills. 

Right now I am finding a job which let me pay my studies. I get the impression that I could do the job pretty well due to I get the necessary skills. Good communication and outgoing person. Furthermore, I am up to date respect to new technologies and everything related to web 2.0. I am a freeky man.

I would appreciate the opportunity to meet with you in person to discuss my qualifications and answer any questions you may have.

So, I would like to have a meeting with you and further explain you face to face what are my skills for the vacancy and why I am a good candidate for the job.

Thank you for your time and consideration, I look forward to hearing from you. 

Sincerely,

Alejandro (put full name)

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerelly, Alejandro.