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English as my second language I have been studying English for a while and because of that I started to look for some reasons to improve my knowledge more and more. First of all the reasons, I discovery only 2,8% of Brazilians are fluent in English and 6% have any contact with the language, which is very little for 207 million people. In a recent research that had done in Brazil, it says the salary can increase 50% if you speak fluently English. Companies nowadays are looking for people to expand their business in all the world. Another good part in speak English (o any other idiom) is that you can have more fun involving with the real experience transmitted by native speakers. You can have trips, live abroad and enjoys the local culture. The last one reason as better as the others is 50% of the sites on the internet are in English, and know the language will help us with researches, news, games, youtube and practicing our reading and listening.

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English as my second language

I have been studying English for a while, and because of that, I started to look for some reasons to improve my knowledge more and more.

First of all the reasons, I discovered that only 2.8% of Brazilians are fluent in English and 6% have any contact with the language, which is very little for a country of 207 million people.
In a recent research that had been done in Brazil, it says the salary can increase 50% if you (<--Avoid the generic/impersonal "you" when writing.) a person speaks fluently English. Companies nowadays are looking for people to expand their businesses in all over the world.
Another good part in speaking English (or any other idiom language) (<--Be careful! "Idiom" in English does not mean "language.") is that you a person can have more fun being involved in with the real experiences transmitted by with native speakers. You He/She can have take trips, live abroad, and enjoys the local cultures.
The last one reason, which is as better important as the others, is that 50% of the sites on the internet are in English, and knowing the language will help us with researches, news, games, YouTube, and practicing our reading and listening.

Nicely written, Theys. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions about my corrections =)

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English as my second language

I have been studying English for a while and because of that, I started to look for some reasons to improve my knowledge much more.
First reason, I discovered only 2.8% of Brazilians are fluent in English and only 6% have any contact with the language, which is very few for a population of 207 million people.
According to a recent research done in Brazil, the salary can increase by 50% if you speak fluent English. Companies nowadays are looking for people to expand their businesses across the world.
Another good part of speaking English (or any other language) is that you can have more fun by involving in the real experience of native speakers. You can enjoy trips, live abroad and enjoy local culture.
The last reason as good as the others is, 50% of the sites on the internet are in English, and knowing the language will help us with research, news, games, youtube and practicing our reading and listening.

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