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Informal letter Hi Tom, Thanks for your letter. Please, talk me about your exams. You were worring a lot, weren't you? What about camping, I really want to come with you and your friends. I think, it's great idea! But where and when I might will come? I think, the best place for camping is park, which is near my sister's home. This park is very beautiful, and in it so safety. Or you decide go to the forest? It's not good idea for my opinion. Yes, I have been camping in past, but I give my tent my cousin. Can you or your friends share with me tent? Also, please tell me about your friends, who going to come whith you. Am I know them? Write back soon, Paula

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Informal letter

Hi Tom,
                Thank you for the letter. How were your exams? You worried a lot didn't you?

What about camping? I think it'd be a really great idea to go camping with you and your friends!  But where should I come and when? I think the best place to go camping would be at the park near my sister's home. This park is very beautiful and very safe. Or would you prefer to got to the forest? Though in my opinion that's not a good idea.

Even though I've been camping in the past I gave my tent to my cousin.Can you or one of your friends share a tent with me?

P.S Tell me about your friends and who's coming. Do I know them or do they know me?

Write back soon,
Paula

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Informal letter

Hi Tom,
Thanks for your letter. Please, talk tell me about your exams. You were worrying a lot, weren't you?

What about campin?, I really want to come with you and your friends. I think it's great idea! But where and when should I might will come? I think, the best place for camping is at the park, which is near my sister's home. This park is very beautiful, and it is also very safe. in it so safety. Or you decide go to the forest? It's not good idea for in my opinion.

Yes, I have been camping in past, but I give gave my tent away to my cousin. Can you or your friends share with me tent? Would you or your friends like to share a tent with me?

Also, please tell me about your friends? Who going to come whith you?AmDo I know them?

Write back soon,
Paula

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