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Photo of my shrimps I forget attaching a photo. It's my shrimps. Very beautiful,isn't it?

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Photo of my Shrimps

I forgot to attaching a photo. 
Those are my shrimps. 
Very beautiful, aren't they? << You're referring to your shrimps so you need to make it plural

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