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to my friend I'm a real girl who just want to make friend with you.When someone care about me even touch my heart.I would be very grateful and do the best for you.Then we'll be closer friend.so don't just want to know what I look like and don't require we must meet each other by web camera.come on!We just know each other these day.If we be closer friend,you can see me by web camera as you like. I know lots of people doubt of my photo,but it's really my own.Believe it or not, this is your problem. When you see me by web camera,you will think i'm a cute girl or just a general girl.You aren't detective who need to proof my appearance.You are just my friend who want to know if i have a good temperament and have the same hobby like you. Finally thanks to the friend who cared about my sick yesterday . Thanks to the friend who respected my culture and comprehended my reason.I will remember you are my real friend. (if i make some mistakes, can you help me change them?thanks a lot)

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to my friend "To A Friend" or "To Friends",

I'm a real person who just wants to make friends with you.  I would be most grateful and reciprocate with my best when some cares about me and touches my heart.  Then we may become closer friends.  No need to know what I look like, nor requiring a web camera for us to meet in virtual reality.  When we had become real friends, you can see me in person or through the web cam.

There are many who doubted the one in the photo is me.  I know who I am.  Whether if you believe that is the case or not, it is not my problem.  When you see me in the web cam, you may think I'm cute or  plain.  You are no detective needing proof of my appearance.  A friend is someone who wants to know what's inside me and if we share common interests or hobbies.

Finally thanks to the friend who cared when I was sick yesterday.  Thanks to the friend who respects my culture and understands me. Then you are my real friend.

(If I make mistakes, can you please correct them?  Many thanks)

1.  You don't need to specify like this.  It sounds strange.  Makes an English reader thinks you are Pinnochio.

I'm a real girl 1 who just want to make friend with you.When someone care about me even touch my heart.I would be very grateful and do the best for you.Then we'll be closer friend.so don't just want to know what I look like and don't require we must meet each other by web camera.come on!We just know each other these day.If we be closer friend,you can see me by web camera as you like.
I know lots of people doubt of my photo,but it's really my own.Believe it or not, this is your problem.
When you see me by web camera,you will think i'm a cute girl or just a general girl.You aren't detective who need to proof my appearance.You are just my friend who want to know if i have a good temperament and have the same hobby like you.
Finally thanks to the friend who cared about my sick yesterday . Thanks to the friend who respected my culture and comprehended my reason.I will remember you are my real friend.
(if i make some mistakes, can you help me change them?thanks a lot)

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That was very touching Freya
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well.Thank you for your blessing。
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HI , It is good idea and hope you are in a good health ;)

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