About Shrine Island (Miyajima)
Hi. Today, I introduce Shrine Island which is in Hiroshima where I live. Shrine Island is called Miyajima in Japanese and one of Japan's three most beautiful garden and registered as a World Heritage Site. You have to go there by the ship because there is an Island. While you are on the ship, red torii which is symbol in its Island will appear in your eyes. By the way, Torii is a symbol and entrance of a shrine and it is everywhere in Japan. Miyajima's torii is difference from others because it is built on the sea. You can go there by a ship or by on foot because there is a high tide and low tide. If you come in Hiroshima, you should go to Shrine Island and the atomic bomb dome which I introduced at my notebook before. Please enjoy sightseeing in Hiroshima.
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About Shrine Island (Miyajima)
Hi. Today I would like to introduce Shrine Island which is in Hiroshima where I live. Shrine Island is called Miyajima in Japanese and is one of Japan's three most beautiful gardens and registered as a World Heritage Site. You have to go there by boat because it is an island. While you are on the boat, red torii which is a symbol representing this island will appear before you. By the way, 'torii' is a symbol for the entrance to a shrine and it is everywhere in Japan. Miyajima's torii is different from others because it is built in the sea. Actually, you can go there by boat or0
About Shrine Island (Miyajima)
Hi. Today, I want to introduce you to Shrine Island, which is near Hiroshima where I live. Shrine Island (also known as Miyajima in Japanese) is one of Japan's three most beautiful garden spots and it is also registered as a World Heritage Site. You typically have to go there by boat because, of course, it is an island. While you are on the boat, the red tori, which is a symbol of this island will suddenly appear before your eyes. By the way, the torii is a common symbol found at the entrances of shrines, and it is encountered everywhere in Japan. However, Miyajima's torii is different from the others because it is built as if floating on, or arising out of, the sea. As mentioned above, you can go there by boat or sometimes, if you are adventurous, even by foot because there is a high tide and low tide. If you ever come to Hiroshima, you should visit both Shrine Island and the Peace Memorial (commonly called the Atomic Bomb Dome, which is also registered as a World Heritage Site) which I introduced in my notebook before. Please come and enjoy some sightseeing in Hiroshima!
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About Shrine Island (Miyajima)
Hi. Today, I will introduce you about Shrine Island which is in Hiroshima where I live. Shrine Island is called Miyajima in Japanese and one of Japan's three most beautiful gardens and is registered as a World Heritage Site. You have to go there by the ship because there it is an Island. While you are on the ship, red torii, which is the symbol in its represanting the Island will appear in front of your eyes. By the way, Torii is a symbol and entrance of a shrine and it is everywhere in Japan. Miyajima's torii is difference different from others because it is built on the sea. You can go there by a ship or by on foot because there is a high tide and low tide. If you come in to Hiroshima, you should go to Shrine Island and the atomic bomb dome which I introduced at in my notebook before. Please enjoy sightseeing in Hiroshima.Want to progress faster?
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