Composition 8A, 9B
Please correct any grammatical errors in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be too complicated. Thanks!
You are too old when you finally manage to get money and time for voyage. So you cannot move or act and cannot think as you want, even if you go for a voyage.
Children seem really happy when they discover or know something new.
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Composition 8A, 9B
Please correct any grammatical errors in my writing. It’s for high school students, so sentences should not be too complicated. Thanks!You are too old when you finally manage to get money and time for voyage. So you cannot move or act and cannot think as you want, even if you go for a voyage.
Children seem really happy when they discover or know something new.
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Composition 8A, 9B
When you finally manage to get enough money and time for travel, you are too old. Therefore, you are limited by money when deciding what to do with your life, and cannot move, act, or think as you want, even if you travel on a voyage.
Children seem to be really happy when they discover or learn something new.
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