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English homework
Hello, my name is Takumi Yamamoto. Today, l'll be talking about Ivan Pavlov and his work to prove a conditioned reflex.Background
Pavlov was born in Russia. After he graduated from college, he became scholar of physiology. During his research on the salivary glands of dogs, he found that dogs secreted saliva in response to the sound of breeder's feet. As a result, he devised the experiment of conditioned reflex.
Research Question
Can a dog acquire a reflex by training and experience?
Methods and Date
In 1902, Pavlov conducted an experiment to test reflex.
1. He exposed a dog to the sound of ringing a bell.
2. Then, he fed the dog food. The dog would eat the food, and secrete saliva.
3. Next, he repeated the first and second steps.
Observations
When the dog is given food, they secrete saliva. After many trials, when the dog only heard the sound of the bell, he started to drool, even if the food was not being presented. This experiment first proved that the reflex of a dog can be acquired by training and past experiences.
Conclusions and Future Research
In 1904, Pavlov won the Novel prize in Physiology or Medicine thanks to his experiment. His work had a impact on classical conditioning and behavioral therapy. (Add more about future research, or what would might do differently to test other similar ideas).
English homework
Hellow my name is Takumi Yamamoto.No!!!!! This sentence is really BAD!!!!!
Takumi Yamamoto ????? Hahaha!!!!! Funny name!!!!!
Today, l'll talk about Ivan Pavlov and his work to prove a conditioned reflex.
No. Stop talking. Now.
Background
Pavlov
???? I can't read this word. Sorry. Who is this man.
was born in Russia. After he graduated the college, he became scholar of physiology. When he did research in salivary glands of the dog, he found that the dog secreted saliva due to the sound of breader's feet. Therefore he did the experiment of conditioned reflex.
I want to refresh.
Research Question
Can a dog acquire a reflex by training and experience?
I can't understand what you said.
Are you crazy ?????
Methods and Date
In 1902, Pavlov conducted an experiment.
1. He made the dog hear the sound of the bell.
2. He gave the dog foods. The dog ate foods and secreted saliva.
3. He repeated first step and second step.
4. The dog only heard the sound of the bell and he started to drool.
The experiment proved that a reflex of the dog was aquired by training and experiment.
Conclusions and Future Research
In 1904, Pavlov won the Novel prize in Physiology or Medicine thanks to his experiment. His work had a impact on classical conditining and behaviral therapy.
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