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today(2011.5/28 Saturday) I made cookies for my friends^^ I'm happy if they says "It's delicious." Now I'm doing my homeworks. I have many homeworks of Japanese, math, and English. I have to finish them hard. Afternoon, I'm going to study English with my friend. After that.....I don't have plan especially.(^o^;) What will you do today? or....What did you do today?^^ Thank you for reading(^o^)

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Today(2011.5/28 05/28/2011 Saturday)

I made cookies for my friends^^
I'm happy if they says "It's delicious."

Now I'm doing my homeworks.
I have many homeworks of a lot of homework in Japanese, math, and English.
I have to finish them hard. work hard to finish them.

This afternoon, I'm going to study English with my friend.

After that.....I don't have plans especially.(^o^;) 

What will you do today?
or....What did you do today?^^

Thank you for reading(^o^)

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Nice job! I didn't notice Bradley had corrected some of these until just now! Maybe mine will help you as well?

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today(5/28/2011 Saturday)  Dates in English use any of characters to separate each part /.- (5/28/2011 5-28-2011 or 5.28.2011) but never a mixture.  Americans use Month then day then year.  Europeaners use day then month then year. So America 5/28/2011 and Europe 28/5/2011.  Never the way you put it.

I made cookies for my friends^^
I'm happy if they say "It's delicious."

Now I'm doing my homeworks.
I have a lot of homework in Japanese, math, and English.
I have to finish them and they're hard.

This afternoon, I'm going to study English with my friend.

After that.....I don't have especially have plans.(Or "I don't have special plans".  They mean different things in english.)(^o^;)

What will you do today?
or....What did you do today?^^

"What will you do today?" is asking about the future.  It may be morning and you want to know what they will do today.

"What did you do today?"  is asking about the past.  It may be night and you want to know what they have accomplished.

Thank you for reading(^o^)
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Good luck with the homework! ^_^

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