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Essay : Fashion is taking over our lives Good evening! I would like you to correct this essay for me and if it is necessary to modify any sentence, feel free to do it ! Thanks in advance! Fashion is taking over our lives The type of clothes we wear has changed much since humans started using them. What's more, the way people feel abour their appearance has changed with it. For some people, looking good is one of their priorities when they leave their houses. However, it is not that important. Despite of it, nowadays, you can be judged by the clothes you wear or your skin colour. It is important only when you attend meetings or job interviews and you want to give a first good impression. Clothes, as the years go through ( or over the years ), have changed their appearance as well as their prices. Clothes are so overpriced that some people cannot afford to dress properly as not everybody is willing to pay thousands euros for a piece of clothing. As for clothes' appearance , that has been revolutionary. People went from wearing boring clothes to wearing bright coloured clothes. A simple piece of clothing changed a lot of people's minds. To sum up, clothes can be something really important to everybody. They give you a whole new perspective. I used the word 'clothes' many times. I would like to give some synonyms to make this essay mora natural. Thanks !

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