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Carlota
Hollywood Last weekend Sep. 16 was the Independent Day of Mexico, I took train to go to Los Angeles for three days. First day I took a tour car to see Hollywood's stars houses. That time I thought I was in a dream, cause I never thought I had been there! Second day, took around to Santa Monica, the end of 66, and tasted the famous hot dog, which superstars have to take a line. It was really delicious! Now I'm taking the train to back, three days were not enough!

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Hollywood

Last weekend Sep. 16 was the Independence Day of Mexico, and I took train to go to Los Angeles for three days. The first day I took a tour car car tour to see Hollywood's star's houses. That time I thought I was in a dream, because I never thought I had been would be there! The second day I took drove around to Santa Monica, the end of 66, and tasted the famous hot dog, which superstars have to take make a line. It was really delicious!
Now I'm taking the train to back, three days were not enough!
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Hollywood

Last weekend was Sep. 16 which was the Independence Day of Mexico, I took a train to go to Los Angeles for three days. The first day I took a tour car to see the houses of Hollywood's star's . The whole while I felt I was in a dream, cause I never thought I had been would be there! The second day, took I went around to Santa Monica, the end of route 66, and tasted the famous hot dog, which superstars have to take wait in a line. It was really delicious!
Now I'm taking the train to back, three days were not enough!


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I'm glad you enjoyed my city haha :P

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