A flight
After leaving my baggage at the check-in desk, I went to security. After that, I stopped to buy a gift in duty free. I got to the gate just in time, showed my passport and boarding card and boarded the plane.
There was no space left in the overhead locker, but fortunately my hand baggage was small so I put it under the seat in front of my. I sat down, fastened my seat belt and the flight departed on time. I enjoyed the flight!
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A flight
After leaving my baggage at the check-in desk, I went to/through security. After that (already used "After" in preceding sentence), In the terminal, I stopped to buy a gift in duty free. I got to the gate just in time, showed my passport and boarding card/pass, and then boarded the plane. (need to add comma)There was no space left on the plane in the overhead lockers, but fortunately my hand baggage was small so I put it under the seat in front of memy. I sat down, (I) fastened my seat belt, and (I) watched the flight departed on time. I enjoyed the flight! (last sentence seems slightly out of place. Too quick of a temporal shift from the second-to-last sentence)
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