Qué hice ayer en pasado simple y continuo.
Yesterday, I dated a friend, we went to film, the film I liked so much how he to me or good a little less, because he liked me a lot, then, went to lunch, it was nice, then, we met some friends of him, they motivated us to go to took a few beers and The final we agreed, we went to ÁMBAR VIOLETA AZUL A very quiet place, they let us know that they were happy sharing this moment with us and more in such a special place.
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Qué hice ayer en pasado simple y continuo.
Yesterday, I dated a friend(1), we went to film(2), the film I liked so much how he to me or good a little less, because he liked me a lot(3), then, went to lunch(4), it was nice(5), then(6), we met some friends of him(6), they motivated us to go to took a few beers and The final we agreed(7), we went to ÁMBAR VIOLETA AZUL A very quiet place, they let us know that they were happy sharing this moment with us and more in such a special place(8).1- the idea is correct, however, it is not the proper way to express it (la idea esta bien, sabes lo que querias decir, pero no esta bien expresada). A correct way to express your idea would be: "I went on a date with a friend.
2- "We went to the movies" or "we went to watch a movie"
3- the idea here is not very clear.( La idea no esta muy clara. )
4- I'd say: "we went for lunch" or "we had lunch".
5- I would end it there: " It was nice. " instead of a comma.
6- As you already have a "Then", I would write: " after that, we met some of his friends."
7-they motivated us to go to took a few beers and The final we agreed. I understand that take in Spanish is, tomar agua, tomar el libro, however in English take is not used like this. The correct way to say it is: "They convinced us to go drink a few beers and finally we agreed to it."
8- Especially in such an extraordinary place.
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Hola Sara, tu texto está etiquetado como "Español" al estar escrito en ingles, si quieres que te lo corrijan creo que será mejor si lo categorizas como "Inglés"
Un saludo!
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