piece of poetryA poem. pls, find mistackes

Nothing But The Truth
prologue

Nothing but the truth
Only thing that can I can use.
For telling us you my history
I suppose, it will be is but now a mystery…



Little naughty lazy Jane
She just Playeds a simple game.
If you don’t Not having have what you want
You may Just make up what you need
For example an elephant
Ohr 1 it may be a Chinese aunt?
You may make up what you need
Nobody can you forbid.2
For no one can tell me not.

Flying buses, swimming trains
Burning ice and frozen flames.
Everything for her it would3 exist
If only you can imagine this.

It was4 calm and sunny day
As Jane was  returning from the bay
Where she caught a lots5 of sharks
I don’t didn't lie! She said to us. Said she

Alarm! Alarm! What's the matter??
Step aside, for it will you be better!
Lot’s Lots of fire trucks is a rushing
Fire! Fire! Flashing and trashing

One of fire trucks is a stopping
One Fireman was start to talking:
Where's is a the house number?
Twenty six of at Street Cucumber?
It is T'is not a case for kidding
Loosing time is not admitting! 6
Time's a losing, please  no fooling!
Dear girl, we all will be bless
If you said , answer to where’s this is place!?

Little naughty lazy Jane
She just Playsed a simple game
Go to left, and after- then right
Till you’ll see a rather bright
Store signboard on the right5
After this, tern turn to left
Go down and Jesus geez!
You'll be there on the right5
.

Thank you, little girl
Said the firemean
Does they knew all know?
That was a fail…
For a fall, they all went.

She Jane was rather egoistic
Flaming house – realistic
I don’t care – said us she Jane
I just played a simple game.

At this very Every second of this moment
Saw Comes a stranger in a crazy trot
It was One of oldest witches she was,
Who protecting Our world she protects.

Summed up all circumstances
She Decided to make a sentence to cast a spell she did
Since that time you able use "From now shall ye use
Nothing other but the truth!"

Poor Jane! Such a way she doeswasn’t use to
But for  case Nothing way to can she choose to
Only the truth for every from this moment forth
For That’s t'is your punishment.

So, I think it will be A lesson it will be
For all liars after Jane
If you want to hear sooth 6 hear the truth
Just Call for useful Jane  it will be use! for all that is true.

Correcting one's poem besides the obvious syntax, grammar and spelling, it is a most difficult task compared with other styles of writing.  This is because it is your expression.  I can only suggest things on the rhythm, rhyming and choice of words.  It may be right for me but not to you or others.  Poetry is very tricky.

One comment.  I didn't see anything in the poem to suggest that Jane was lazy.  As a matter a fact, a rather active girl.  I would leave out the word "lazy".

1.  I prefer, "Perhaps" for rhythm
2.   This means you are forbidding someone to do something and not the other way round as you wanted to express.  Besides "forbid" is big a word to use in this children's poem
3.  Or "shall", depending on your intent.
4.  This sounds too much like prose.  I prefer, "A calm and sunny day it was".  But then it would not rhyme with "bay"
5.  For rhythm
6,  This makes no sense.  You are forcing a rhyme here.  Already you had established that Jane was making up stories and that she should not be kidding when there's an emergency.  Time is of the essense and so it makes no sense with Jane's admission.
7.  No such word in English.  Do you mean "soothe"?  But this makes no sense here.

piece of poetry. pls, find mistakes

Nothing but the truth
prologue

Nothing but the truth
Only thing that can I use
For telling us my history
Suppose, it will be mystery…



Little naughty lazy Jane
She just played a simple game
If you don’t have what you want
For example elephant
Oh it may be Chinese aunt?
You may make up what you need
Nobody can you forbid.

Flying buses, swimming train
Burning ice and frozen flame.
Everything for her exist
If you can imagine this.

It was calm and sunny day
Jane returning from the bay
Where she caught a lot of sharks
I don’t lie! She said to us.

Alarm! Alarm! What the matter??
Step aside, it will be better!
Lot’s of fire trucks is rushing
Fire! Fire! Flash and trashing

One of fire trucks is stopping
Fireman was start to talking:
Where is a house number
Twenty six of street Cucumber?
It is not a case for kidding
Loosing time is not admitting!
Dear girl, we all will bless
If you said , where’s this is place!?

Little naughty lazy Jane
She just played a simple game
Go to left, and after-right
Till you’ll see a rather bright
Store signboard
After this, tern to left
Go down and Jesus!
You'll be there.

Thank you, girl
Said firemen
Does they knew?
That was a fail…

She was rather egoistic
Flaming house – realistic
I don’t care – said us Jane
I just play a simple game.

Every second of this moment
Saw a stranger crazy trot
It was one of oldest witches
Who protecting our world.

Summed up all circumstances
She decided to make a sentence
Since that time you able use
Nothing other, but the truth!

Poor Jane! She doesn’t use to
But for case no way to choose to
Only truth for every moment
That’s you punishment.

So, I think it will be lesson
For all liars after Jane
If you want to hear sooth
Call for Jane, it will be use!