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my hometown Hello, こんにちは I want to know more about different cities. Let's talk about it :) I want to tell you about my hometown Kiev... Ohh,today’s weather was just perfect, neither chilling nor terribly hot (like in July when Kiev is like an oven). The city becomes green and blooming! The smell of the fresh grass and awaked trees make me feel renewed inside. Kiev,actually ,is famous for its chestnut trees. The house I live in is located on a srort side street that is about 300 m long and there are more than 100 such trees on it ! They usually start blooming at the beginning of May with lilac together that can also be a symbol of our city because it grows everywhere here. Lilac is also very beautiful and smells great.

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my hometown

Hello,
こんにちは

I want to know more about different cities. Let's talk about it :) I want to tell you about my hometown Kiev...

Ohh,today’s weather was just perfect, neither chilly* nor terribly hot (like in July when Kiev is like an oven). The city becomes green and blooming! The smell of the fresh grass and awaked trees make me feel renewed inside. Kiev,actually ,is famous for its chestnut trees. The house I live in is located on a srort side street that is about 300 m long and there are more than 100 such trees on it ! They usually start blooming at the beginning of May with lilac together that can also be a symbol of our city because it grows everywhere here. Lilac is also very beautiful and smells great.

Ohh,today’s weather was just perfect, neither chilly* nor terribly hot (unlike in July when Kiev is like an oven). During this time the city blooms with flowers and trees are full of leaves giving a green aura all over the city. The aroma of fresh grass just makes me feel so refreshed. Kiev is famous for its chestnut trees. The house I live in is located on a short side street which is about 300 m long and there are more than 100 trees! They usually start blooming by the beginning of May with lilac. Chestnut trees and lilac together can also referred to as a symbol of our city because they are everywhere. Lilac is a very beautiful flower and it smells great.

 

I have litterally translated your sentences but it is not as good as a poet would write :D

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my hometown

Hello,
こんにちは 今日は

I want to know learn more about different cities. Let's talk about it :) I want to tell you about my hometown Kiev...

Ohh,today’s weather was just perfect, neither chilling nor terribly hot (unlike in July when Kiev is like an oven). The city becomes green and everything is blooming! The smell of the fresh grass and the awakened1 trees make me feel renewed inside2. Kiev,actually ,is famous for its chestnut trees. The house that I live in is located on a srort short 3side street, that is about 300 m long and there are more than 100 such trees on its sidesit ! They usually start blooming at the beginning of May with lilac together.  It would be an appropriate to become  that can also be a symbol of our city because it grows everywhere here. Lilac is also very beautiful and smells and has a great fragrance.

Very nice descriptive piece of writing.

1.  Because of your command of the English language, I'm assuming that you are being poetic here.  In writing prose we would not be using such a metaphor.

2.  Or you can say I felt like a new person.

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