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please correct my sentence I have read two chapters of Harry Potter. these two chapters are called "the boy who lived" and "the vanishing glass". For the first chapter was talking about Dursley's family who is Harry aunt's family. especially his uncle, he worked in drills company. when he went to work, he saw a lobby cat acted like a human. then he saw owls were flying in the sky at daytime. that is very weird that we can't see an owl at night. He also saw some people were gathering on the street with cloaks. He heard people were talking about Potter. But he didn't tell his wife about this kind of weird things after he went home. At night the cat sat on the wall and talk about something with another weird person. For the second chapter was talking about Harry went to a zoo with Dursleys family and another family of aunts friends. he had lived with Dursleys ten miserable years, He had lived in the cupboard. his aunt asked him to do housework and his cousin always punch him in the face.he doesn't have equal rights in the family.On cousin's birthday he always was sent to an old lady's house, but this time he had chance to go out with them. they were watching snacks and discovered his genus that he can talk with animals.

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I have read two chapters of Harry Potter. These two chapters are called "the boy who lived" and "the vanishing glass".
The first chapter talks about Harry's aunt's family, the Dursley's. It especially talks about his uncle, who works for a drilling company. When Harry's uncle went to work, he saw a lobby cat acting like a human and then saw owls flying in the sky at daytime. That was very weird for him because owls only fly at night. He also saw some people gathering on the street with cloaks and heard people talking about Harry Potter. However, he didn't tell his wife about these weird things after he went home. At night, the cat sat on the wall and talked about something with another weird person.


The second chapter talked about Harry going to a zoo with the Dursley's and his aunt's friend's family as well. He had lived with the Dursley's for ten miserable years and had lived in the cupboard. His aunt asked him to do housework and his cousin always punched him in the face. He doesn't have equal rights in the family. On his cousin's birthday, he was always sent to an old lady's house but this time he had a chance to go out with them. They were eating snacks and discovered Harry's powers about how he can talk with animals.

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