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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I am 27years old,born in GUIZHOU province . I was graduated from university in the year of 2008. I spend most of my time on study english but i can't say so far . so i want to learn english .i want to make friends here.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am 27 years old, born in GuizhouUIZHOU province .
I was graduated from university in the year of 2008.
I spendt most of my time on studying English but I can't say so far speak well . So i wanted to learn English. I want to make friends here.

You need to be aware of your capitalization for proper nouns.  See my article on the rules of capitalization and spacing,

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Another%20Observation%20-%20Using%20Punctuation%20Marks%20Wrongly%20Or%20Just%20Laziness.htm

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