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Tim Maia, a great singler who I want to share with you. Hi everyone, I would like to share with you, a brazilian song. For those who want to practice portugues or just listen to music. It's a MPB (música popular brasileira).Wrote and released by Tim Maia. Tim was a great singler. He is dead now but your legacy still important on currently days. The song seems black music and Jazz but I'm not sure about that. Anyways, I love it. I hope you all enjoy. Well this is the link who you can check out. - youtube.com/watch?v=syqJAgTQdlU Thanks, feedback please. :)

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Tim Maia, a great singer that I want to share with you.


Hi, everyone. I would like to share with you, a Brazilian song, for those who want to practice Portuguese or just listen to some music. It's an MPB (música popular brasileira) song, written and released by Tim Maia. Tim was a great singer. He is dead now [or: 'He has already passed away'], but his legacy is still important in the current days [or: '[...] important currently/nowadays', '[...] important to this day']. The song sounds like black music and jazz, but I'm not sure about that. Anyway, I love it. I hope you all enjoy it. Well, this is the link for you to check it out: youtube.com/watch?v=syqJAgTQdlU

Thanks and give me feedback, please. :)

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Nice job, man! Keep up the good work!

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